Sunday 6 April 2014

Great writing Jazmyn!!!

Room 4 went out and played hide and seek a couple of weeks ago and are now finishing their writing based on that experience.  Jazmyn's piece of work caught my eye because of some amazing descriptive language she has used.  I LOVE the simile in her story and the descriptive verbs.  Well done Jazmyn!

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